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Thursday, August 27, 2009
A Man is Found Guilty by Fiaiai
10 comments:
Herbert
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I had just realised that a man found guilty for killing his wife is jsut terrible. Anyway your speech has very good tone and expression but its just taht you need to slow down a little bit.
Good topic, cool pictures.Why do people kill people? That's just not the business. I do agree with you though, he shouldn't commited suicide, but instead just explain to her that he doens't want her any more. It's a simple thing to do.
This is an interesting article and the pictures are awesome and one thing you could work on is to add a bit more interesting facts to your great article.
I think you did a fabulous work and I'm interested in your picture, one thing you need to improve on your tone and expression. Anyway I really enjoy watching it.
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10 comments:
I had just realised that a man found guilty for killing his wife is jsut terrible. Anyway your speech has very good tone and expression but its just taht you need to slow down a little bit.
Your picture was very cool. You need to work on making your talking. I could barely understand what you were saying.
Its awesome and also fantastic good talking nice and clear. You need to make more improvement on not been shy.
Well done!!!
I think your news was COOL!.
You had great facts about your movie and I really liked your pictures .
I agree with you 100%
about your opinion.
Your picture was very cool. You need to work on your talking. It was hard to understand what you were saying.
Your pictures were awesome and your story was good. Something to do in the future is to put more character in your voice.
Nice story your pictures were very catching. Just need to work on interesting words as if you were saying it to your friends.
Good topic, cool pictures.Why do people kill people? That's just not the business. I do agree with you though, he shouldn't commited suicide, but instead just explain to her that he doens't want her any more. It's a simple thing to do.
This is an interesting article and the pictures are awesome and one thing you could work on is to add a bit more interesting facts to your great article.
I think you did a fabulous work and I'm interested in your picture, one thing you need to improve on your tone and expression. Anyway I really enjoy watching it.
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