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12 comments:
This was a different and interesting topic. The good that you had in your movie was speaking loud and confident. Something to work on could be to saying your words clearly so we can hear what you are saying!
Luke, very good animation and how you applied the colour in the background. But next time put a but more animation into your news article.
Your story is good i like the way you have drawen your pictures. But you need to work on your voice. You need to make it clearer besids that it was good.
I liked how your picture had lots of bright and eye catching colours, it also had a lot of detail. I suggest that you put more effort into your voice recoring so that it sounds more interesing.
Luke, I think that this topic you have chosen was a bad choice and that you didn't explain it very well, however the animation and presentation of your voice was excellent. But in the future focus more on the story than on the animation. Thanks.
His voice was nice and clear easy for people to listen to and find out what is happening
Well done Luke
I think you had a great movie. Your animations were good. It really told me what was going on before I heard you talking. I think you could work on making your voice a bit more enthusiastic because you sound a bit bored. But overall it was awesome.
I like the colours you added on your picture and the information is great about the 2 men but one thing you could work on is to speak more clearly. You just need to speak a bit slower so we can hear the information about your great article.
I think your story was totally AMAZING. The picture was absolutely AWESOME. I think your story is very interesting and suitable for others to read. Anyway your story has very good tone and expression but it's just that you need to slow down a little bit.
I really like your story. Luke, it's fantastic. I liked the fishermens in the boat because they were catching fish.The drawings were really good. I did understand everything that Luke had said in the story. So keep it up buddy and I hope you had fun.
I like your picture because it is colourful and interesting to look at. But one thing is that you need work on your voice next time try not to struggle on what your saying and concentrate.
I loved this story because of the picture. I bet it was really fun drawing those pics. I liked the way that the fishing rods go up and down. It was really funny.
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